Thursday, January 05, 2006

shem-hammephorash

that everything is self actualizing
god is reaching
for the god that it is in
we struggle with mounts
our quality becomes sin
when we lose sight of what counts

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Blogger am said...

Someone once said that you should not study the Kabala until your 40. Well I'm not 40 and I have looked at the Kabala and been confused by it.

The line "god is reaching for the god that it is in" is excellent. It has a beautiful lyric quality combined with a very evolved and full idea.

That line is good becuase it "shows", it doesn't tell. If there is one thing I have learned it is that poets need to "show and not tell", telling is for politicians and preachers.

8:25 PM  

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