maya
so real of a fealing its decieving
leaving this body for a fealing
leaving this body for a fealing
this one indefinable
realisticly reasonable
idealisticly beautiful
posted by hawlmnyair at 10:42 AM
1-10 over and over again and again until you find the number eleven.
posted by hawlmnyair at 10:42 AM
1 Comments:
I liked this, it has lyric quality that I look for in poems. Are you been inventive with the spelling or just too lazy to look up the dictionary ? :-))
My blog has the following quote:
"To be a poet at twenty is to be twenty. But to be a poet at forty is to be a poet.- Eugene Delacroix".
But a fair reply would be to say that if you want to be a good poet by forty then you better start by twenty. I started around 14 and am now close to 38, after 24 years I have probably 30 poems I think are worth while.
Keep writing.
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